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艾诗人 发表于 2006-5-20 22:25:08

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<DIV style="BORDER-RIGHT: #6595d6 0.75pt solid; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: #6595d6 0.75pt solid; PADDING-LEFT: 8pt; BACKGROUND: white; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; BORDER-LEFT: #6595d6 0.75pt solid; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: #6595d6 0.75pt solid">
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left> <o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>凭栏远眺，正春深云重，落花时节。<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>半片夕阳谁问取，更有波光明灭。<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>檐角微红，梧桐坐暗，黄雀低头掠。<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>悲情唱晚，梅花竟在五月。<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>`<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>常忆诗酒当年，良辰都倚遍，缘何了却？<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>几案秦筝，见双流漫扫，促弦交迭。<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>枉负红颜，章台千里外，音书难索。<o:p></o:p>
<P class=MsoNormal style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>层楼影淡，疏帘幌映空阁。<o:p></o:p></DIV>

天堂有鸟 发表于 2006-5-21 11:24:02

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好词太挤.
悲情唱晚，梅花竟在五月。-奇句

月出东溟 发表于 2006-5-20 22:41:48

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<P medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>枉负红颜，章台千里外，音书难索。<O:P></O:P>
<P medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>层楼影淡，疏帘幌映空阁。
<P medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>好词拜读

第二春吟 发表于 2006-5-20 22:51:49

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情景交融，读来黯然。

泉名发表于 2006-5-21 07:24:02

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<P medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>半片夕阳谁问取，更有波光明灭。
<P medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left> 
<P medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; LINE-HEIGHT: 16.5pt; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #6595D6 .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt" align=left>——蕴藉好词，欣赏！

石心木人 发表于 2006-5-21 09:16:15

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个别地方用词可酌

洞箫妃子 发表于 2006-5-21 12:59:33

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檐角微红，梧桐坐暗……神伤中

梦落疏篱 发表于 2006-5-21 16:37:20

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悲而不怨，悼春好词：）

月出东溟 发表于 2006-5-21 18:15:31

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<DIV class=quote twffan="done">以下是引用天堂有鸟在2006-5-21 11:24:02的发言： 
好词太挤.
悲情唱晚，梅花竟在五月。-奇句</DIV>
制胜之处也

艾诗人 发表于 2006-5-21 21:54:48

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　　多谢这么多仙家鼓励，一并问好！
　　希望多加指点。

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[原创] 念奴娇 春晚

[原创]　　念奴娇　　春晚