石心木人 发表于 2005-11-14 13:39:28

<P>欣赏，学习啊：）</P>

带你飞翔 发表于 2005-11-14 13:56:44

不错，不错，相当的不错。。。。。。

霜染红叶 发表于 2005-11-16 20:19:31

<P>出句：有竹坐听风自语<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>红妆<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：无云卧赏月徐行 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">比较欣赏这一句，“风自语”，“月徐行”，形象生动。</FONT></P>

玉漱公主 发表于 2005-11-16 20:24:21

<P>出句：有竹坐听风自语<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>红妆<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：无云卧赏月徐行 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">欣赏！！</FONT></P>

荡梦堂 发表于 2005-11-17 19:37:12

<P>出句：梨开月下枝枝雪<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>嫣然<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：梅落风前片片春 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">好极！！</FONT></P>

未成曲调 发表于 2005-11-19 22:22:08

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>叶落无痕</I>在2005-11-7 19:16:38的发言：</B><BR><BR>
<P>出句：平湖水月分秋色 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>东方一木<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：曲院池荷醉晚风 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#ff0033>妄评：曲院之曲字，感觉不妥：）</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：秋夜无云天似水<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>胡一刀<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：银河有渡月如舟 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------这个好：）-----------</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：点点芳红凝坠露<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>野渡无人<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：丝丝暮雨倦浮尘 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<FONT color=#ff0033>妄评：好个倦浮尘，很形象：）</FONT>-----------</FONT></P>
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<br>出句：如戏人生多脸谱<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>痴<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT>
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<P>对句：若烟往事倦红尘 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#ff0033>妄评：倦红尘，比上面的倦浮尘弱了很多</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：风将柳絮飘成梦 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>嫣然<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：雨把梅芳卷入尘 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#ff0033>妄评：雨用卷，是否可再炼？</FONT></P>
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<P>对句：阶下清风勾月色 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>出句：窗前冷雨纵秋声<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>一剪梅<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman"><FONT color=#ff0033>妄评：好出句：）冷雨纵秋声（冷雨声）</FONT></FONT></P>
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<P>出句：梨开月下枝枝雪<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>嫣然<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：梅落风前片片春 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#ff0033>妄评：想起两个联句：犁花深处一肩雪；折梅春在手。哈哈：）</FONT></P>
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<p>对句：夕阳远挂秋山角 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT>
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<P>出句：雁字横书晚照中<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>杨花榆荚<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman">-<FONT color=#ff0033>妄评：有趣：）</FONT>-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：柳弄青弦春韵起<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>徐冉<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：风盈翠袖暗香流 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman"><FONT color=#ff0033>妄评：出句好，想起古曲联堂谁的（好象是带你飞翔）风划雨弦，划字再炼更好。这儿有柳弄青弦。对句感觉没有出新：）</FONT></FONT></P>
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<p>出句：十里红妆春欲嫁<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>醉<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT>
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<P>对句：一池绿影夏攸归 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman"><FONT color=#ff0033>妄评：也是感觉出句更有韵味：）</FONT></FONT></P>
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<P>出句：有竹坐听风自语<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>红妆<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：无云卧赏月徐行 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#ff0033>妄评：出句不写人而对句说到人：）</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：敲窗落叶传秋韵<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>榴斋<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：照水斜阳绻晚晴 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#ff0033>妄评：god，上面一个春韵，这儿一个秋韵，这个秋韵还得细一思量不是春韵那么明显，落叶不是秋天的独特....现象，但落叶敲窗，可见叶落之多，也从此点出秋天的意韵来：）</FONT></P>
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<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#ff0033>妄评：god！！！叶落无痕，“骗人”无痕，好句不免上当多说几句，没想到还没完，我不评了就此打住，哈哈闪喽：）<FONT color=#000000></FONT></FONT></P>
<P>出句：梨花老尽收春笔<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>雨露<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：鹤影依然恋雪枝 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：一山风韵凭心取 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>痴<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：万片霞笺着意书 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：把酒当歌，醉去不知春几许 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>倒骑毛驴<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：牵风入枕，梦回犹共月一轮 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：寻诗客去梅心冷<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>旱天雷<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：带韵莺来柳眼青 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：墨沁香风书竹劲 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>倒骑毛驴<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：诗余雅韵透梅馨 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：流霞织锦随风舞 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>文盲公子<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：落日熔金送暮归 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：池中荷叶鱼当伞 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>雨嫣<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：岸畔萤虫柳点灯 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：凌空翠竹争天宠 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>旱天雷<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：照水红梅倩月邻 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>出句：素手拈花招蝶舞<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>林婷玉姣<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>对句：兰船载酒引歌飞 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
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<P>对句：夹岸桃红春秀色 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>叶落无痕<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P>
<P>出句：一溪梅影水含香 <FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>梦蝶<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></P><BR></DIV>
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能丹 发表于 2005-11-23 12:36:05

<P>曲院荷风是西湖一景，曲字对平字应该无误</P>

未成曲调 发表于 2005-11-24 22:14:36

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>能丹</I>在2005-11-23 12:36:05的发言：</B><BR>
<P>曲院荷风是西湖一景，曲字对平字应该无误</P></DIV>
<P>汗，谢丹丹指教：）</P>

走过美丽 发表于 2005-11-25 13:02:55

<P>美丽也去凑了热闹，自觉水平有限，但为了能得到提高，也拿出来供各位联友砸砖。</P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>冷风扰乱归雁歌 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>大海行舟看水平 [班主任]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>联坛参赛拼技巧 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>白云画卷千峰秀 [东方一木]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>青壁诗书万古幽 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>波撼秋江寒月碎 [轴云]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>风摇霜岭落红飞 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>风将柳絮飘成梦 [嫣然]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>火把诗心化作魂 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>月下修竹藏春色[走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>浊浪纷飞水上风 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>群芳报春晖 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>满苑暖枝乱絮飞，风信撩开春梦 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>春风有意来撩闲 [走过美丽] </FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>桂香入枕薰幽梦★★★★★</FONT></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face=宋体>春雨透怀润痴心[走过美丽]</FONT></FONT></P>
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水尽云起 发表于 2005-12-17 00:35:26

<P>一个字－－很好！</P>
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